character building

Good name for thread right. And by the way that is good first chapter for David.

And I think the older Violet turned out better then I thought she would. Hehe...the grace of her mother and coldness of Litha ><; yeah...wait until you meet Mark her brother. Heh....

Um...Kelly. Ummmmm?

heh...Yeah I got the basic Idea for what has been done to him done. So I guess we introduce him to Kelly since he is heading back over that way to find out was done right?

Um...yesh...but what is he going to do?

I was thinking more of him being part of Kelly's gang that is trying to keep her off their turf. Which changes to say....trying to catch? For what she sees....but also someone making her life a little hell too. Per the gang saying for one to do. And since he never meet kelly boyfriend and the times we are on right now will set it up good for a big bang in the summer.

That can work.

So he is part of group that is after Kelly. Hmm so you really want her to get gang banged?

I can probably do it with another character but if David has to participate he will have to be under someone elses control.

-Shrugs- I don't know yet. Depends on how long we get to set this up before Rein wants to bite me in the ass in PERSON. -coughs- Let's make it slow. For Kelly just started to work for the company. and she has to get a couple packages delivery and what not. And say she has run in with the gang on one that sends her ....... thats not going to work if this gang works for the bossman ><;; -thinkthink- Um.....

Rein is coming to see you in person?

Ok...Lets say kelly has to deliver something and she kinda lingers on the scene and sees something she shouldnt, like murder or rape. They find out she saw and they hunt her down and such.

Noooooooooooooo.......

And say she was delivering money to pick up drugs or laundry money or something and see rape or killing by the gang for say another mob boss?

So she sees something that another mob is doing on her mobs turf?

that could work too. And once the bossman finds out she works for him...wants to make her his slave? or give her to the gang? Or....um....?????

Slave is the best and most workable option. They want to use her not only to find out the inner workings of their enemy and they get to use her as a toy.

She won't do it at first and then gets more pressure from the bossman through the gang to get her to do it. But thats not going to work...her mother in jail and she don't care if her mother lives or die. And she knows rein can handle him self.

So we have to find then thing that Kelly fears most. Once you have that you can move this plot along.

maybe this....what I wrote out today at work will help???

Mother: Kathy Whipple arrested for murder and robbery, or get this a Mob boss say in Miami and got life. to protect her self from being thrown in jail rolled on her mother and turned all the papers she had collected to blackmail the mob boss. However, the lower mobs put out contract on her and mother so she went under protective services. her back story as pretty much true left behind everything to take a cargo ship to Dominio City working her way over. Starting a new life.

Real name: Rachel Sally Heal

she has been abused by her mother for not say keeping eye out or listening for something or not doing something fast enough. her mother burned her arms with cigarettes and cigars and also extra hot water to curling iron.

The first Idea seems to be a bit more understandable. So if I understand it right: She is hiding from another mob boss because she has very sensitive information that can have him thrown in jail. Correct?

Yeah, or that she testified at something he did while her mother was robbing someone and killed that person. O.......there is retrial coming up and they want her dead...? but the local mob boss has other ideas for her? Puts her under his protect working for him and giving her a place to live and so on.

RETRIAL IS PERFECT!!!

New Evidence has come up and in the previous trial Kelly wasn't called to the stand but now she will ber and they know she knows stuff so they want her dead.

And thus the gang step up the harassment of her then word comes down to kill her. Even o' say the local cops have given the a local mob boss her for him to protect, but he finds better use for her. >> thats going to mean two different gang members?

One is plenty. Additional memebers can be made as needed. So I guess I have a rough Idea of what the boss has planned for her...I see collars xD

Poor Rein....gang bangers bugging her and another mob hunting her down to killer for what she knows. plus one thinks she make a good slave...mostly virgin.

Yeah Rein will have is hands full protecting Kelly. I'd say have him enlist some help from wonder boy but...

>> he is vampire there will be blood spilled no matter what. But lets keep it one thing at time...work up to the big thing. And then try to plan for the big blow up.

And Kisty the girl I RP with a lot say Litha and Clark are soap. xD

Thats true plus we don't need them fighting...yet
Does she like how I RP? -curious/Nervous-

-shrugs- We were talking alll about different stuff. we do throw this what you think of this...she say not heavy but large and deep also. And a soap....

No, we don't need them fighting...trash place. Hm....places she says work cleaning yards are done be someone else. Things to throw her off balance will be best were sooner or later she is going to have to tell rein the whole story.

She did try to powerplay in getting her sword and then zap the power from a natural storm. I called her on it. Heh...

Figures. Shes knows that she is going to lose the fight.